Song Tittle Challenge: Edge of Seventeen

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Blood dropping on the dirty floor. Walls beginning to move closer. Shadows dancing next to the old graffiti and tags. Fuck off. Lisa – I’m gonna kill ya bitch. I love you – her eyes are directed towards the pink-green chaos in front of her. Then she faints.

Wings unfolding. Climbing higher. Stopping – being rejected, being sent on a journey again.

She wakes up, the needle still hanging in her right arm. The demons of her life don’t want her to leave now. Not before Lisa has turned seventeen.

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For more information on the “Song Title Challenge”:

http://kokkieh.wordpress.com/2013/10/28/song-title-challenge-22-edge-of-seventeen-stevie-nicks/

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3 Responses to Song Tittle Challenge: Edge of Seventeen

  1. KokkieH says:

    Thanks for joining the challenge. This is an interesting take on the title. I think you capture the chaos of a drug-induced haze well.

    • thanks for your comment. I just listened to the song – got apparently off track with my text a bit, regarding the song : -)

      Your text is very nice – perfectly for the ScienceFiction-genre!

      • KokkieH says:

        The whole point is that it shouldn’t match the song. I’ve made a romance from gangsta rap, sci-fi from metal, and a murder mystery from a hymn. Write whatever the title makes pop into your head.

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