windy

der wind, der wind
das himmlische kind

das tanzen am boden
das herumwirbeln der kleider
das lächeln auf meinen lippen

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the wind, the wind
the heaven-born wind

dancing around in circles
inviting clothes to be passengers on its flight
conjuring a smile on my lips

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2 Responses to windy

  1. Dhyan says:

    I like it, it is concise and simple and have a feeling of childish rhyming to it.
    There for i thought that another rhyme, even a small one, in the 2nd stanza would be good

  2. I see; have to say that I have problems creating rhymes on my own – the first stanza is from the fairy tale “Hänsel and Gretel” – but why not, maybe I’ll find something .. thanks for the suggestion!

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