a river between us

they say that blood is
thicker than water.
then why do I prefer to
stand at the Rhine,
the river
passing by your home
and just watch its waves
than to pick up
the phone and
call you?

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2 Responses to a river between us

  1. Dhyan says:

    do you rather bleed?

    but hey i think it’s wonderful piece.
    I would drop these lines: “the river
    passing by your home,
    and” – don’t think they help

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