*

some intimacy
that we feel

leaves us

even faster
than a dandelion

looses its seeds.

it only gets
problematic

if just one of us

wants the seeds
to grow into

a flower.

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10 Responses to *

  1. so beautiful and true that it hurts.

  2. Dhyan says:

    seems you’ve sorted that stanza problem

  3. Dhyan says:

    Love is corny. What to do. But no, it isn’t too corny.

    I think it’s a subject almost any one writing has dealt with at least once as any one who live has lived it at least once that it might easily feel as corny.
    i think.

    and it is painful to be the ‘one’ in this equation

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