that we feel
than a dandelion
looses its seeds.
it only gets
if just one of us
wants the seeds
to grow into
so beautiful and true that it hurts.
dziękuję bardzo for your comment! (hope the polish is right) yes, you’re right with your words
it’s right :) no need to thank, though.
seems you’ve sorted that stanza problem
sometimes stanzas seem right to order the disorder of the thoughts
and it’s not too corny? (feels a bit like)
Love is corny. What to do. But no, it isn’t too corny.
I think it’s a subject almost any one writing has dealt with at least once as any one who live has lived it at least once that it might easily feel as corny.
and it is painful to be the ‘one’ in this equation
(fortunately?) this time I’m not the “one” what doesn’t make it easier
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